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Post by DemonChiyo on Apr 18, 2014 20:53:06 GMT -5
the intro from a short I'm writing
A gentle breeze crossed the sky, playing with the young girl's hair as she stared out into the distance, her eyes longing yet stone-cold and her expression never-changing(OOC: got this line from a song: "Table no mukou no kimi ni shaberi kaketeiru no ni, kimi wa hyojou hitotsu kaete wa kurenai, konna ni chikaku ni boku ga iru no ni which translates to "I'm just beyond the table and I'm trying to talk to you. A never-changing facial expression is on your face, even though I'm right here with you." you probably weren't interested in that fact but ok). She watched as the sun's bright light slowly emerged from the darkness, creating a picture that made her heart ache with nostalgia.
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Post by MeBeLizzi on Apr 18, 2014 21:04:25 GMT -5
Ooh keep going. I want to know what she's looking at.
Ooooh and can you read my poem in this section? I want advice. Its a new style for me.
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